Oh mighty lass, taker of all vows, Oh redeemer of the innocent bliss.
Your dormant might, the powerful roar and the humility of a deserving king.
The soothing tunes played in your court and the chills of a true being.
The presence of lightness in thy life and the jingle of a rather light heart.
The slow caress of your hands and the spectacles that you show.
The way the great moon embellishes you and the joy of such a beautiful sight.
The secrets that you cared to share and the ones that you hid in the depths.
The love and the life you nurture, the greatness of your bitter silence.
The softness of your gardens and its beauty sans the green.
The days, the hours and the seconds you took and the memories you gave.
The tears you let dry on my face and the very pains you soaked.
Yet today I come again to sit in your citadel and let you wash my sorrows again.
For all that has been done and said, I come again the selfish I.
poignant, nicely written.
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DeleteVery nicely written... :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Kcalpesh
DeleteBeautifully stated !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Green Speck
DeleteThere's a touch of mysticism here. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteyes there is a bit of that there, I never planned on it but somehow it happened to be there.
DeleteLoved every line.. too good! :)
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DeleteBeautiful poetry Rupertt! Keep writing poetry often :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sri, Sure I will.
DeleteExpression of enlightenment and gratitude! Well written!
ReplyDeleteThanks Uppal
Deletebeautiful thoughtful lines and i loved the way the poem ended...last line rounded off the whole thought so beautifully...lucky me u visited my blog and i got a chance to visit yours...:)
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Vaisakhi
Oh!no, lucky me...
DeleteThank you. It was a pleasure to read you blog and its a greater pleasure to see that you reciprocated :)