Thursday 9 February 2012

A Dream Proposal





The night sky was dark, yet it was beautiful, star studded and comets shooting. The silver moon-lings have been slowly dancing their way from the horizon towards the sandy shore that shone with a certain silvery elegance. There was a cold breeze now and then and so there to was the slow erotic hum of the deep abyss. It was as if at this secluded and lonely beach the universe had started working its century old magic tricks. Of all these beautiful things there was one thing that stood out among the rest, It was a  moonlit silhouette, with beautiful hair flowing flawlessly down her cape that flew about in the wind, with the most stunning pair of eyes that reflected the beautiful moon in all its grandeur better than the vast see before her and with a pair of lips where bloomed my whole world. She was beautiful and she was mine.


I had chose the place not knowing all its beauty and certainly not what the universe had in store for me. It was just perfect, I knew it when I saw her, her moonlit face and her gaze fixed at the horizon. She was perfect, the air was perfect and I was ready to take the next steps. there was no longer a pounding heart and no longer worries of it all going wrong, time had just stopped from then. I slowly descended the stairs that took me to the beach. She immediately sensed me , she turned around facing me,ah! her beautiful face. For an instance we both stopped there like two perfectly crafted sculptures, then she smiled and turned around returning to gazing at the horizon.


I slowly went to her, there was nothing more we could say we had finished with our dialog long ago, now it were just silent exchanges. I knew where I had to stand, slowly moving close to her, I gently placed my hands above her waist, moved close to her without even slightly disturbing her from her trance. She acknowledged my presence with a smile and slowly placing her head over my shoulder and we slowly sat down there in the soft silver sand listening to the oceanic hums. Time just went by as our hands found each other and slowly engaged itself in a slow embrace. The time was perfect, I had to do it now. I slowly pulled away and she looked at me with an anxious on-look. In her eyes she was expecting something , there was innate curiosity in her sparkling eyes. I slowly put my hands in my pocket and  retrieved a small black box covered with velvet cloth, I slowly moved to my knees and opened it in front of her. A small box with a small ring inside, just for her.

10 comments:

  1. Nice and beautiful proposal ! :)

    BTW why is ur blog pages "off" life? why not of?

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  2. What a brilliant moment! So well captured:) ( I love that cloud pic. a lot)

    your newest follower and a regular visitor now.

    cheers,
    Kajal @http://purplechronicle.blogspot.com/

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  3. It was a 'Yes,' wasn't it? It couldn't have been otherwise; the setting was perfect. You created a beautiful image with your words.

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  4. @S

    I thought pages off life meant a more apt name after all what ever i write are pages torn away from my life and put up for you all, my beloved readers.

    or

    its simply because pagesoflife was taken of by some idiot before I even got a chance to have it.

    you can take which ever you like but I strongly insist that it was the first and never the second. :)

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  5. Wow.. am i glad to come across this post??? YES!
    I'm a moon fanatic... and ur post is sooo beautifully written, it was like watching a scene frm a fairytale.. Cheers :)

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  6. Thank you Kajal, Its because people like you exist that I even blog. thanks for showing the patience and persistence to read the things i write.

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  7. Oh D!

    don't jump to conclusions dear,

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  8. Thanks you! Pranita!

    Hurray! I am a moon fanatic too. cheers

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  9. Extremely well narrated, with beautiful imagery, and the whole post builds up very nicely. Great writing.

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come on! scribble down whats in your heart!